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Apologies for the delayed update - life has not given me any space for my own writing. I hope this makes up for the delay.
For any readers who have forgotten what happened in the other eleven chapters, Chapters 1 - 11 may be found here.
In which a vile scheme is laid bare
Chapter Twelve: A Conspiracy Unmasked
The staff room was a sombre, panelled chamber, dominated by a round table and heavy carved chairs of bog-oak. One chair, facing the door, was heavier and more elaborate in design than the others, and it was in this that Phineas Nigellus Black took up his station, staring down the room at his staff with a look of haughty disdain. More hesitantly, the rest of the company took their places around the table, though I noticed that all of them avoided the chairs nearest to Black.
“Well, Headmaster?” said Drummond when they were all seated. “It seems to me that you have been caught red-handed. What is your explanation for this diabolical behaviour?”
“When has a headmaster of Hogwarts, oldest and most glorious school in the land, submitted to questioning by underlings?” retorted Black imperiously. “I have nothing to say to you, sir, when you address me in that tone.”
“Then I shall supply an explanation,” replied Holmes. “Or rather, I shall supply the facts of the case, for I consider your behaviour to be inexcusable – though of course, not having had the advantages of a wizarding education, it is possible that I have failed to appreciate some of the moral niceties of the case.”
“Well, I for one am far from convinced,” said Professor Llewellyn. “Why would a member of the richest and most powerful wizarding family in the land, and Headmaster of Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry besides, resort to black magic to dupe a student into theft? The Headmaster has access to every room in the castle – if he wished to consult the Codex he could have done so quite openly any at hour of the day or night. And if money was an object, both his family home and the Headmaster’s study contain many items of far greater monetary value. No, Mr Holmes, I will require more proof than this.”
“Reasoned like a true Ravenclaw, madam!” exclaimed Holmes. “Your logic is impeccable – but it is based on a faulty assumption. Black never wanted the Codex for himself, and he had no need of money. His true motives were far darker and more deadly.
“The truly wealthy care nothing for money, no more than you or I care for the air we breathe or the ground we walk upon. Their kind finds other preoccupations to bring meaning to their days, and the traditional Black family obsession has always been purity of blood. The powers that magical folk possess ensure that they need never want for life’s basic necessities, but purity of blood was beyond price, belonging only to a special, favoured few. Of course, people with no magical blood whatsoever frequently come to magic, and many of these newcomers have proved most competent and worthy wizards, but in the eyes of Black and his like they were a different order of humanity: excellent sergeants but never to be trusted with a commission – at best negligible quantities and at worst dangerous upstarts.
“When Black first came to Hogwarts, teaching positions were reserved, as of right, for the oldest families, a situation that suited him very well. However, when change is in the air, not even a school as isolated as Hogwarts can hope to avoid it altogether, and as the years passed, a more progressive element began to emerge. Though all of the best wizarding stock themselves, some of the teachers began to cultivate protégés among the newcomers, opening new doors for people who could previously have hoped to rise no higher than tradesmen, clerks, private tutors or upper servants. There was talk of posts at Hogwarts – and in some cases, this talk even became reality, though for some mysterious reason,” (this with a very piercing look at Black, who returned his gaze expressionlessly) “none of these upstarts ever lasted very long. Eventually, rumours of a curse began to circulate, and those you call by the whimsical name of ‘mudbloods’ learned to channel their talents in other, less risky directions.
“Then Godfrey Easingwold came to Hogwarts. This excellent young man was unusually gifted, intelligent and popular, and he seemed set to sweep all before him. By the time Headmaster Black (who is not over fond of children, and often takes considerable pains to avoid them) became aware of his existence, young Easingwold was already a rising star at Hogwarts. In the course of the next few years, due to a chain of circumstances that reflect as much on the utter unsuitability of all that year’s pure-blooded candidates as on his own merits, it quickly became clear that, short of a miracle, the one remaining honour that had previously been the sole prerogative of purebloods was within his grasp: Godfrey Easingwold was to be made Head Boy. To Black, this was intolerable. Easingwold must be disposed of – and he must leave in disgrace, lest any who followed after should wish to make a martyr of him.
“While it pains me to admit that my own society has yet to completely fling off the shackles of class and blood, it is hard for those of us outside the Wizarding world to understand the depths to which Black was driven by his blood pride and affection for the status quo. Nonetheless, he was so driven. The evidence speaks for itself. While Godfrey Easingwold was triumphing in every aspect of his magical education, the man in whose care he had been placed was plotting his downfall – and a very neat little plot it was, if I may say so, showing surprising sophistication for a wizard.
“At some point, Black must have learned that Easingwold’s father was an antiquarian bookseller, and the seed of a clever (if elementary) scheme began to germinate in his mind. What better way to blacken the name of a bookseller’s son than to arrange for him to be caught stealing Hogwarts’ most treasured book? Easingwold would be induced to take the Codex, and a Muggle specialist would be called in to confirm his guilt in this most Muggle of crimes, so that if any questioned his that young Easingwold had done the deed, the evidence would be so black against him that not even his most fervent partisan could have anything to say in his defence.
“The fact that Godfrey Easingwold is a dutiful young man of regular habits only made Black’s task easier. The night the Codex was taken, Black entered Ravenclaw Tower by way of the fireplace outside the Codex Chamber, where he lay in wait for Easingwold to pass on his rounds. There was a slight delay, and the signs of impatience were still plainly to be read the day we came here, from the purple scuff-marks which those extraordinary boots Black chooses to affect had left on the skirting board. Eventually the unfortunate youth appeared on his nightly rounds, and walked straight into the trap. Black cast the Imperius curse on him from behind, and, with considerable difficulty, prevailed upon him to take the Codex from its chest and run off into the night, to live or die as he would. Since the only possible hiding place was the Forbidden Forest, death would, in fact, have been the likelier outcome, but for the good offices of the caretaker Goyle.
“It now wanted only a Muggle detective to complete the case against this unfortunate young man, and it was at this point that Black made his first serious miscalculation. A man who wished for a shoddy job left half-done and no awkward questions would have done far better to enlist the help of Scotland Yard, but Black’s family pride would never have allowed him to set foot in a Muggle police station – and so Weaselby was dispatched to Baker Street. At the time he was eager enough to avail himself of my services, for like many of his kind, Black has been accustomed to equate lack of magical ability (of which I am proud to say I have none) with stupidity, but it did not take him long to learn his mistake. Once we arrived at Hogwarts and he had a chance to see me in action, he proved a most distant and unhelpful client – suspiciously so, in fact, for he set his cleaning staff to remove all traces of anything save what he wished me to see from the Codex chamber, and other areas of Ravenclaw tower had been tampered with as well.
“As my faithful chronicler Watson will tell you, I have substantial experience of criminal investigation, and little that the criminal mind can produce is capable of surprising me now. It happens from time to time that a client (usually one with an elevated estimation of his powers and pretensions to social superiority) requests my services to clear him of a crime that he in fact committed himself, believing himself to have built up an impregnable case against some innocent victim. How many is it now, Watson?”
“Twenty-three, I believe,” I replied, observing with delight the look of pure chagrin that crossed Black’s features, “twenty-four if you count the Case of the Absent Stag Beetle – but that, of course, is hardly fit for the world at large…”
“Indeed, yes,” said Holmes hurriedly, “let us hear no more of that sordid little affair, I beg! Be that as it may, I had seen enough of criminals of Black’s type to be prepared for such an eventuality in this case, and when I discovered that Easingwold had made no preparations for his abrupt departure from Hogwarts my suspicions were strengthened. Shortly after that I learned from another source, which I need not name here, that Godfrey Easingwold was still in hiding in the grounds of Hogwarts. My companions and I tracked him down, and I had the whole sorry story from his own lips. At this point I must express my thanks the estimable Professor Binns for his most complete account of the illegal curses of the wizarding world – a very nasty little set indeed, I might add – for in the light of this knowledge it was plain that poor Easingwold had fallen victim to the Imperius curse. It remained only to bring the proof before the public, which I did by relieving the Headmaster of his wand as I brushed past him on my way into the staffroom, and then employing a little mild subterfuge to persuade Binns to cast the Priori Incantatem charm upon it. The rest you know. One question only remains. You have the facts: now can the staff of Hogwarts be trusted to see to it that justice is done?
Deadly silence reigned all around the table. Finally Professor O’Connell cleared his throat.
“Well, Headmaster,” he said at last, “the case against you seems tolerably complete. What have you to say in your defence?”
“In my defence?” said Black in a voice that chilled me to the marrow. “I absolutely decline, sir, to defend myself any accusations levelled at me by such a one as this. What – must Phineas Nigellus Black, headmaster of Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry, scion of the Ancient and Most Noble House of Black, answer to this creature? Must I, descendent of the greatest sorcerers to walk this earth, give an account of my actions to this ape that speaks with a man’s voice, this ignorant Muggle who knows nothing of our traditions and ways, of our ancient pride – one not only born blind and deaf to the gift of magic but who, by his own admission, takes a perverse pride in the fact? No, sir, we have fallen low indeed at Hogwarts, shamefully so, if I must make excuses for ridding its sacred precincts of the threat that was hanging over it, but Phineas Nigellus Black will never stoop so low as that!”
At this Professor Weaselby rose to his feet, his face livid with anger.
“You should answer, sir, to your own conscience!” he exclaimed. “You speak of a threat – I speak of a child – an innocent placed in your care whose trust you foully abused. You have brought shame on Hogwarts, and upon us all!”
Professor Llewellyn was staring at Black as though she had never seen him before. Her eyes were swimming with tears, and for the first time that evening I saw her as she truly was: an aging woman in deep mourning, staggering under a blow that had left her reeling.
“Oh, Cousin Phineas!” she moaned, “how could you! That poor boy! How can we ever hope to make amends for this? And whatever possessed you to do this wicked thing? I have known your pride since we played together as children, but I would never have believed you capable of such wanton cruelty.”
Black recoiled as if she had struck him, and for a second his face softened, but before he could speak Professor Drummond brought his fist crashing down on the table.
“Enough of this!” he cried. “What more do we need? This fellow’s place is in the dock, and I, for one, will take great pleasure in seeing him there!”
“What?” cried Black, outraged. “The nerve of the fellow! You speak to me of the dock – after Guyana?”
Although the significance of this remark was lost on me, it provoked a violent reaction among all present, and what dignity the staff of Hogwarts had managed to retain was quickly lost as the meeting descended into uproar. Holmes and I watched in growing dismay as strong words were exchanged, fists shaken and wands drawn. It was at this point that I felt a gentle tug at my sleeve.
“Doctor Watson,” said Professor O’Connell quietly, “I believe now might be a good time for you and Mr Holmes to leave, while you are unobserved. If you would be good enough to follow me?”
The staff room was a sombre, panelled chamber, dominated by a round table and heavy carved chairs of bog-oak. One chair, facing the door, was heavier and more elaborate in design than the others, and it was in this that Phineas Nigellus Black took up his station, staring down the room at his staff with a look of haughty disdain. More hesitantly, the rest of the company took their places around the table, though I noticed that all of them avoided the chairs nearest to Black.
“Well, Headmaster?” said Drummond when they were all seated. “It seems to me that you have been caught red-handed. What is your explanation for this diabolical behaviour?”
“When has a headmaster of Hogwarts, oldest and most glorious school in the land, submitted to questioning by underlings?” retorted Black imperiously. “I have nothing to say to you, sir, when you address me in that tone.”
“Then I shall supply an explanation,” replied Holmes. “Or rather, I shall supply the facts of the case, for I consider your behaviour to be inexcusable – though of course, not having had the advantages of a wizarding education, it is possible that I have failed to appreciate some of the moral niceties of the case.”
“Well, I for one am far from convinced,” said Professor Llewellyn. “Why would a member of the richest and most powerful wizarding family in the land, and Headmaster of Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry besides, resort to black magic to dupe a student into theft? The Headmaster has access to every room in the castle – if he wished to consult the Codex he could have done so quite openly any at hour of the day or night. And if money was an object, both his family home and the Headmaster’s study contain many items of far greater monetary value. No, Mr Holmes, I will require more proof than this.”
“Reasoned like a true Ravenclaw, madam!” exclaimed Holmes. “Your logic is impeccable – but it is based on a faulty assumption. Black never wanted the Codex for himself, and he had no need of money. His true motives were far darker and more deadly.
“The truly wealthy care nothing for money, no more than you or I care for the air we breathe or the ground we walk upon. Their kind finds other preoccupations to bring meaning to their days, and the traditional Black family obsession has always been purity of blood. The powers that magical folk possess ensure that they need never want for life’s basic necessities, but purity of blood was beyond price, belonging only to a special, favoured few. Of course, people with no magical blood whatsoever frequently come to magic, and many of these newcomers have proved most competent and worthy wizards, but in the eyes of Black and his like they were a different order of humanity: excellent sergeants but never to be trusted with a commission – at best negligible quantities and at worst dangerous upstarts.
“When Black first came to Hogwarts, teaching positions were reserved, as of right, for the oldest families, a situation that suited him very well. However, when change is in the air, not even a school as isolated as Hogwarts can hope to avoid it altogether, and as the years passed, a more progressive element began to emerge. Though all of the best wizarding stock themselves, some of the teachers began to cultivate protégés among the newcomers, opening new doors for people who could previously have hoped to rise no higher than tradesmen, clerks, private tutors or upper servants. There was talk of posts at Hogwarts – and in some cases, this talk even became reality, though for some mysterious reason,” (this with a very piercing look at Black, who returned his gaze expressionlessly) “none of these upstarts ever lasted very long. Eventually, rumours of a curse began to circulate, and those you call by the whimsical name of ‘mudbloods’ learned to channel their talents in other, less risky directions.
“Then Godfrey Easingwold came to Hogwarts. This excellent young man was unusually gifted, intelligent and popular, and he seemed set to sweep all before him. By the time Headmaster Black (who is not over fond of children, and often takes considerable pains to avoid them) became aware of his existence, young Easingwold was already a rising star at Hogwarts. In the course of the next few years, due to a chain of circumstances that reflect as much on the utter unsuitability of all that year’s pure-blooded candidates as on his own merits, it quickly became clear that, short of a miracle, the one remaining honour that had previously been the sole prerogative of purebloods was within his grasp: Godfrey Easingwold was to be made Head Boy. To Black, this was intolerable. Easingwold must be disposed of – and he must leave in disgrace, lest any who followed after should wish to make a martyr of him.
“While it pains me to admit that my own society has yet to completely fling off the shackles of class and blood, it is hard for those of us outside the Wizarding world to understand the depths to which Black was driven by his blood pride and affection for the status quo. Nonetheless, he was so driven. The evidence speaks for itself. While Godfrey Easingwold was triumphing in every aspect of his magical education, the man in whose care he had been placed was plotting his downfall – and a very neat little plot it was, if I may say so, showing surprising sophistication for a wizard.
“At some point, Black must have learned that Easingwold’s father was an antiquarian bookseller, and the seed of a clever (if elementary) scheme began to germinate in his mind. What better way to blacken the name of a bookseller’s son than to arrange for him to be caught stealing Hogwarts’ most treasured book? Easingwold would be induced to take the Codex, and a Muggle specialist would be called in to confirm his guilt in this most Muggle of crimes, so that if any questioned his that young Easingwold had done the deed, the evidence would be so black against him that not even his most fervent partisan could have anything to say in his defence.
“The fact that Godfrey Easingwold is a dutiful young man of regular habits only made Black’s task easier. The night the Codex was taken, Black entered Ravenclaw Tower by way of the fireplace outside the Codex Chamber, where he lay in wait for Easingwold to pass on his rounds. There was a slight delay, and the signs of impatience were still plainly to be read the day we came here, from the purple scuff-marks which those extraordinary boots Black chooses to affect had left on the skirting board. Eventually the unfortunate youth appeared on his nightly rounds, and walked straight into the trap. Black cast the Imperius curse on him from behind, and, with considerable difficulty, prevailed upon him to take the Codex from its chest and run off into the night, to live or die as he would. Since the only possible hiding place was the Forbidden Forest, death would, in fact, have been the likelier outcome, but for the good offices of the caretaker Goyle.
“It now wanted only a Muggle detective to complete the case against this unfortunate young man, and it was at this point that Black made his first serious miscalculation. A man who wished for a shoddy job left half-done and no awkward questions would have done far better to enlist the help of Scotland Yard, but Black’s family pride would never have allowed him to set foot in a Muggle police station – and so Weaselby was dispatched to Baker Street. At the time he was eager enough to avail himself of my services, for like many of his kind, Black has been accustomed to equate lack of magical ability (of which I am proud to say I have none) with stupidity, but it did not take him long to learn his mistake. Once we arrived at Hogwarts and he had a chance to see me in action, he proved a most distant and unhelpful client – suspiciously so, in fact, for he set his cleaning staff to remove all traces of anything save what he wished me to see from the Codex chamber, and other areas of Ravenclaw tower had been tampered with as well.
“As my faithful chronicler Watson will tell you, I have substantial experience of criminal investigation, and little that the criminal mind can produce is capable of surprising me now. It happens from time to time that a client (usually one with an elevated estimation of his powers and pretensions to social superiority) requests my services to clear him of a crime that he in fact committed himself, believing himself to have built up an impregnable case against some innocent victim. How many is it now, Watson?”
“Twenty-three, I believe,” I replied, observing with delight the look of pure chagrin that crossed Black’s features, “twenty-four if you count the Case of the Absent Stag Beetle – but that, of course, is hardly fit for the world at large…”
“Indeed, yes,” said Holmes hurriedly, “let us hear no more of that sordid little affair, I beg! Be that as it may, I had seen enough of criminals of Black’s type to be prepared for such an eventuality in this case, and when I discovered that Easingwold had made no preparations for his abrupt departure from Hogwarts my suspicions were strengthened. Shortly after that I learned from another source, which I need not name here, that Godfrey Easingwold was still in hiding in the grounds of Hogwarts. My companions and I tracked him down, and I had the whole sorry story from his own lips. At this point I must express my thanks the estimable Professor Binns for his most complete account of the illegal curses of the wizarding world – a very nasty little set indeed, I might add – for in the light of this knowledge it was plain that poor Easingwold had fallen victim to the Imperius curse. It remained only to bring the proof before the public, which I did by relieving the Headmaster of his wand as I brushed past him on my way into the staffroom, and then employing a little mild subterfuge to persuade Binns to cast the Priori Incantatem charm upon it. The rest you know. One question only remains. You have the facts: now can the staff of Hogwarts be trusted to see to it that justice is done?
Deadly silence reigned all around the table. Finally Professor O’Connell cleared his throat.
“Well, Headmaster,” he said at last, “the case against you seems tolerably complete. What have you to say in your defence?”
“In my defence?” said Black in a voice that chilled me to the marrow. “I absolutely decline, sir, to defend myself any accusations levelled at me by such a one as this. What – must Phineas Nigellus Black, headmaster of Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry, scion of the Ancient and Most Noble House of Black, answer to this creature? Must I, descendent of the greatest sorcerers to walk this earth, give an account of my actions to this ape that speaks with a man’s voice, this ignorant Muggle who knows nothing of our traditions and ways, of our ancient pride – one not only born blind and deaf to the gift of magic but who, by his own admission, takes a perverse pride in the fact? No, sir, we have fallen low indeed at Hogwarts, shamefully so, if I must make excuses for ridding its sacred precincts of the threat that was hanging over it, but Phineas Nigellus Black will never stoop so low as that!”
At this Professor Weaselby rose to his feet, his face livid with anger.
“You should answer, sir, to your own conscience!” he exclaimed. “You speak of a threat – I speak of a child – an innocent placed in your care whose trust you foully abused. You have brought shame on Hogwarts, and upon us all!”
Professor Llewellyn was staring at Black as though she had never seen him before. Her eyes were swimming with tears, and for the first time that evening I saw her as she truly was: an aging woman in deep mourning, staggering under a blow that had left her reeling.
“Oh, Cousin Phineas!” she moaned, “how could you! That poor boy! How can we ever hope to make amends for this? And whatever possessed you to do this wicked thing? I have known your pride since we played together as children, but I would never have believed you capable of such wanton cruelty.”
Black recoiled as if she had struck him, and for a second his face softened, but before he could speak Professor Drummond brought his fist crashing down on the table.
“Enough of this!” he cried. “What more do we need? This fellow’s place is in the dock, and I, for one, will take great pleasure in seeing him there!”
“What?” cried Black, outraged. “The nerve of the fellow! You speak to me of the dock – after Guyana?”
Although the significance of this remark was lost on me, it provoked a violent reaction among all present, and what dignity the staff of Hogwarts had managed to retain was quickly lost as the meeting descended into uproar. Holmes and I watched in growing dismay as strong words were exchanged, fists shaken and wands drawn. It was at this point that I felt a gentle tug at my sleeve.
“Doctor Watson,” said Professor O’Connell quietly, “I believe now might be a good time for you and Mr Holmes to leave, while you are unobserved. If you would be good enough to follow me?”
TO BE CONTINUED
Now God be thanked....
Date: 2007-11-05 09:07 pm (UTC)At last! Huzzah!
Re: Now God be thanked....
Date: 2007-11-05 10:03 pm (UTC)Fantastic!
Date: 2007-11-05 09:28 pm (UTC)Oh! Your Holmes voice is simply perfect. I love this beyond all reasonable measure.
Now I just need to know about Guyana.
Re: Fantastic!
Date: 2007-11-05 09:56 pm (UTC)OMG, me too!
Re: Fantastic!
Date: 2007-11-05 10:56 pm (UTC)Re: Fantastic!
Date: 2007-11-05 10:06 pm (UTC)Guyana is because of an AU I may write some time if the dates fit - a Ravenclaw Codex/Lost World crossover in which Professor Drummond, the daring herbologist, goes with Professor Challenger on his first expedition and acquires a lot of dangerous specimens for his greenhouses. Not only exploring with a Muggle, there were problems with Customs too...
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Date: 2007-11-05 09:57 pm (UTC)LOL!
I'm glad that you've updated. It's such a great fic!
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Date: 2007-11-05 10:07 pm (UTC)I'm glad you're still enjoying this! One chapter left to go, and an epilogue...
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Date: 2007-11-05 11:26 pm (UTC)no subject
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Date: 2007-11-06 07:22 pm (UTC)Thank you - I'm glad you approve!
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Date: 2007-11-06 01:45 am (UTC)Oh, I've MISSED this story.
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Date: 2007-11-06 07:23 pm (UTC)I've missed it too! I spent the last two or so weeks of the Work Crisis pining for Holmes...
Will try to supply the next chapter a lot sooner - I can't believe how long this one has taken!
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Date: 2007-11-06 06:27 am (UTC)Take that, Lestrade!
The Case of the Absent Stag Beetle! *has inappropriately prurient curiosity*
Guyana! *is fascinated*
Oh, I've had so much fun reading this chapter - you do such brilliant Conan Doyle exposition, and I love the way the other Professors have turned on Phineas Nigellus.
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Date: 2007-11-06 07:27 pm (UTC)I'm afraid the World is Not Yet Prepared for the Case of the Absent Stag Beetle, but I am starting to think about a sequel to the Ravenclaw Codex - possibly with Dumbledore...
Guyana - in case I ever get the time to write Professor Drummond on one of his botanising trips into the Lost World series...
I love the way the other Professors have turned on Phineas Nigellus.
I enjoyed writing that too - well, if I make someone as nasty as Phineas Nigellus, I really do need someone to stand up to him as a counterweight...
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Date: 2007-11-06 08:05 am (UTC)This was a just spot on version of the classic "Holmes reveals all" scene, and your Holmes is just right.
I'd hazard a guess that this isn't the last of the revelations, either.
And Weaselby standing up to Black - wheee!!!
MM
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Date: 2007-11-06 07:33 pm (UTC)I'm glad you enjoyed the "Holmes reveals all", because I found it surprisingly hard to write. You'd think that summarising the plot details I'd been mulling over for months would be easy - but it really wasn't!
I'd hazard a guess that this isn't the last of the revelations, either.
For a certain value of "revelations", certainly.... there is another chapter to go, after all...
I'm glad you enjoyed it!
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Date: 2007-11-06 11:01 am (UTC)I want to know about the Case of the Absent Stag Beetle now, though, and Guyana -- though it looks like a Lost World crossover from the comments. And you really should write a sequel where Holmes meets Dumbledore.
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Date: 2007-11-06 07:35 pm (UTC)But for me the big kudos is that it works for you, because I know you're an expert in this field, and I did work very hard to get the register right. It was fun - English has got a lot blander since Conan Doyle's day...
I'm afraid that the world is not yet prepared for the enormity of the Case of the Absent Stag Beetle - but I am starting to think about a sequel, and wondering if I could get Dumbledore in. But would he get on with Holmes?
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Date: 2007-11-06 11:54 pm (UTC)I don't know if Dumbledore would get on with Holmes. Not on first glance, certainly. I think Holmes would find him endlessly frustrating, but that Dumbledore would probably love Holmes immediately and want to ply him with questions. Especially a younger Dumbledore, which would be just fascinating.
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Date: 2007-11-07 06:26 pm (UTC)I don't know if Dumbledore would get on with Holmes. Not on first glance, certainly. I think Holmes would find him endlessly frustrating, but that Dumbledore would probably love Holmes immediately and want to ply him with questions. Especially a younger Dumbledore, which would be just fascinating.
I'm not sure if Holmes would hit it off with Dumbledore either. Watson would probably have disparaging things to say about his dress sense too. Mrs Hudson, on the other hand, would develop a massive crush on him...
I'm seriously contemplating doing this. Though I have a very Conan Doylish beginning for another sequel still, which doesn't match the Dumbledore story at all.
We'll see anyway - remember, I have to finish this one first!
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Date: 2007-11-06 11:02 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2007-11-06 07:37 pm (UTC)I had real trouble summarising the plot, but doing the digs was great fun.
And thank you!
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Date: 2007-11-06 10:10 pm (UTC)I did wonder how Holmes and Watson would get out of there without being Obliviated, but this scenario seems to work (assuming O'Connell is trustworthy, which I suppose remains to be seen).
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Date: 2007-11-07 06:29 pm (UTC)I did wonder how Holmes and Watson would get out of there without being Obliviated, but this scenario seems to work (assuming O'Connell is trustworthy, which I suppose remains to be seen).
Well spotted - this was why the last chapter had to finish the way it did!
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Date: 2007-11-07 06:30 pm (UTC)And I'm glad you liked the Scotland Yard dig - any opportunity, Holmes!
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Date: 2007-11-14 04:29 pm (UTC)Part 1
Date: 2007-11-14 07:19 pm (UTC)"More hesitantly, the rest of the company took their places around the table" - the contrast of this to the haughty disdain of Phineas made the perfect picture in my mind.
And now Drummond really does give me that "Bulldog Drummond" imagery. Though he'll always be Dumbledore-like to me.
"Diabolical behavior" - love that phrase. And at least Phineas is proud of Hogwarts. Imperiously proud. Hee.
Holmes can be so cutting, under such a guise of gentlemanly deportment!
I swear I felt a mounting heartbeat at "His true motives were far darker and more deadly."
LOVE how you worked in toujours pur. (I probably should not type that when I'm not sure of the spelling, but there it is.) In fact that whole paragraph is brilliant.
And oh my goodness, a paradigm shift at Hogwarts! I love it. Pity that purity of blood does not equate acceptance of needful change, Mr. Black.
It's interesting about Head Boy being the last prerogative of the purebloods; on a related note, I think that as you leave school and go out into the world, who got to be Head Boy or prefect or Homecoming Queen rather loses its 'this is my whole life!' quality as other things take over and are more immediate. Like working for a living, damn it all.
But Black never really got out of school and so he still feels a rather emphatic, dangerously-vested interest on who gets to be Head Boy. Its importance to him is all out of proportion to what Head Boy really means. God forbid it be someone who actually deserves it for merits other than an accident of birth. (I seem to be unable to stop glaring at Black as I write all this. Confound him!)
And look at Holmes. He can admit faults in his own society, he can see that he doesn't understand things fully (well, he said "those of us," but I bet he understands it himself right enough) - he can _say_ all that in enemy country, and even if we knew nothing else about Holmes, we'd know he was a greater man than Black.
"and the seed of a clever (if elementary) scheme" - I love Holmes. Stinging barbs, said so mildly, et al.
"in this most Muggle of crimes" - you know, phrase after phrase keeps leaping out at me as evidence of your genius in expostulating on the bones & sinews & nerve-endings of a story, let alone of life itself.
And that damn Black. Though equally damned funny that his boots provided his downfall. Holmes knew!!
And good ol' Goyle.
“It now wanted only a Muggle detective to complete the case against this unfortunate young man, and it was at this point that Black made his first serious miscalculation. A man who wished for a shoddy job left half-done and no awkward questions would have done far better to enlist the help of Scotland Yard..." - Love it. Love it love it love it. Pride goeth before a fall, and so forth. I like Holmes stating that he's proud he has no magical ability.
"usually one with an elevated estimation of his powers and pretensions to social superiority" - HA!
I WANT TO KNOW THE CASE OF THE ABSENT STAG BEETLE! *ahem* Just had to mention that.
"for his most complete account of the illegal curses of the wizarding world – a very nasty little set indeed, I might add –" The emphasis is, of course, divine, but one also wonders if the "nasty little set" phrase could also be attributed to the wizarding world itself. Not to everybody. Just to some of them...in it.
Oh, Watson, such hyperbole. "Deadly silence reigned all around the table." I love it.
Re: Part 1
Date: 2007-11-15 08:28 pm (UTC)And now Drummond really does give me that "Bulldog Drummond" imagery. Though he'll always be Dumbledore-like to me.
Did I tell you about the Bulldog Drummond connection, or did you work it out from first principles? Either way I'm impressed!
Holmes can be so cutting, under such a guise of gentlemanly deportment!
It's really good fun to write when he is, as well!
And oh my goodness, a paradigm shift at Hogwarts! I love it. Pity that purity of blood does not equate acceptance of needful change, Mr. Black.
I did 19th century history for A level at school. Most of it was eye-wateringly dull, but the one thing I did learn was that Holmes's century was full of the most amazing changes - it was when we learned to be modern, in many ways. I can't believe even the Wizarding world was unaffected!
And look at Holmes. He can admit faults in his own society, he can see that he doesn't understand things fully (well, he said "those of us," but I bet he understands it himself right enough) - he can _say_ all that in enemy country, and even if we knew nothing else about Holmes, we'd know he was a greater man than Black.
That's a lovely thing to say, and I'm sure Holmes would approve - thank you!
equally damned funny that his boots provided his downfall. Holmes knew!!
Well.... what would a Sherlock Holmes story be without boots?
And thank you for missing the completely gratuitous dig at Scotland Yard, as well as the rather more pertinent one at people who think they can outwit the greatest detective who ever lived!
I WANT TO KNOW THE CASE OF THE ABSENT STAG BEETLE! *ahem* Just had to mention that.
I'm sorry - that case cannot be told to the world at large... pretty sordid though...
And a very neat little observation!
Thanks again for a huge and glorious review - absolutely made my day!
Re: Part 1
Date: 2007-11-15 08:42 pm (UTC)I bet you were the one who brought up Bulldog Drummond in this context first. I do think I've heard it before (echoes of the past), but...can't quite grasp where. So maybe it was all you and I'm having a false deja vu.
It's true, the 19th century all over the place had so many things burst into life. I'd like to think I'd be one of the people who appreciated progress!
Re: Part 1
Date: 2007-11-15 10:22 pm (UTC)Though the sad reality is that, given my family background 100 years ago, I'd probably be a worn-out drudge working in a mill or struggling to hold a household together... *sigh*
Part 2
Date: 2007-11-14 07:19 pm (UTC)Though nobody calls Holmes a creature! *balls fists*
An ape!?
Perverse pride!? Oh, he's gonna get it now!
And wow...Professor Llewellyn seems to represent Black's last hold on his younger, less fraught-with-rue-and-conniving days. Damn it. I do NOT want to feel any vestige of sympathy for him.
I want to know about Guyana too. And the Stag Beetle in case you missed it before. :)
***
Well. Despite my diatribes against Black, for I fully believe that he does hold such horrid world views, I did find myself wondering if it all wasn't a little too pat. WAS Black really the culprit here? Or at least, was he really the sole culprit? Is there a power behind the throne that the throne doesn't even know about? Will I be a fool to suggest it?? I think there's something more going on!! And yet...
And yet I suspect something will come out of Professor O'Connell leading them away!!
Re: Part 2
Date: 2007-11-15 08:31 pm (UTC)Professor Llewellyn seems to represent Black's last hold on his younger, less fraught-with-rue-and-conniving days.
I really feel rather sorry for poor Llewellyn - she's probably the only person in the room who genuinely liked Black, and she really didn't deserve this.
Yes - O'Connell still has a few words to say to Holmes...
Re: Part 2
Date: 2007-11-15 08:43 pm (UTC):)