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This Twilight-fic lark is a lot harder than it looks! I'm having trouble with Edward's voice - he's coming across as Fanon!Snape at his most constipated. Any suggestions on how to improve much appreciated!
( Chapter 2 - Flora arrives in Forks, and meets Edward )Chapter 1 can be found here.
