Here's the first half of my story. A second, shorter part should follow soon - I had hoped to be able to post the lot by now, but part of the end has proved tougher to write than I thought, so I'm splitting it in two.
It's ironic - I started reading fanfic as interludes between translation projects - and now look what's happened to my fanfic!
I would really like to know what you think - especially, whether, having read the first half, you'd consider reading the second.
At least common sense has prevailed, and I've ditched the unpronouncable title in favour of something slightly more conventional (let's face it, I was just being difficult).