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dolorous_ett ([personal profile] dolorous_ett) wrote2008-01-02 10:13 pm

Sherlock Holmes and the Ravenclaw Codex - Epilogue

... which means that the unthinkable has happened: it's finished!

Chapters 1-13 can be found here.

In which Holmes and Watson discuss one or two remaining questions on the train South

Epilogue: Homeward Bound

The great Aberdeen-London express had left the soaring mountains of the Scottish Highlands far behind, and was racing through the rolling hills of Fife, where the corn stood tall and golden in the late summer sun. We were perhaps half an hour short of Edinburgh when Holmes stirred and woke from his slumber, scattering the papers that had piled up about him like drifted snow. 

“Well, Watson,” he said, indicating my notebook, “I see you have wasted no time in chronicling our latest adventure. I am glad that you consider the subject a worthy one.”

“A most worthy tale indeed!” I exclaimed. “I would not have missed it for the world! I only doubt my powers to do the subject justice!”

Holmes chuckled.

“On the contrary, my friend,” he said with a smile, “I can think of no story better adapted to your powers of sensationalism and melodrama. The tale is overblown, the villain grotesque, the young man at the centre of the story most dreadfully wronged… in short, to entrust this story to any other hands would be criminal.”

“It’s a fine story, and I really believe I can make something truly splendid out of it,” I replied. “But it is not quite finished yet. For what has become of the Ravenclaw Codex?” 

“Oh, as to that,” said Holmes in that offhand way that I knew so well, “the Ravenclaw Codex is currently in the possession of Godfrey Easingwold, ironically enough. He would have handed it over on the spot, I believe, but I was not quite easy in my mind about his security in London, and in the end I persuaded him to take it with him as a guarantee of safety. So long as Black and his minions leave the lad to recover in peace, the Ravenclaw Codex will return with Easingwold to Hogwarts. However, should Black cause any member of the Easingwold family – or their guests – so much as a moment's worry or inconvenience, Easingwold or one of his companions will convey the Codex secretly to the Reading Room of the British Museum – for I think I may safely say that it would never occur to Black and his like to venture there. There it will be held in a place of honour, where that the finest scholars in the world may come to learn from it, and delight in it. You might argue, indeed, that it will have come home at last, to be cared for by the true heirs of Rowena Ravenclaw – she who loved wit and learning above all things.”

“Bravo, Holmes!” I exclaimed. “I cannot think of a more worthy fate for that noble tome! But even so, the story is not quite at an end. What of Weaselby's tale? Of O'Connell's papers? Will their testimonies enable you to put an end once and for all to the machinations of the sinister Black?”

Holmes’s face darkened.

“Weaselby's tale,” he said after a pause, “was of little practical use, for all that I rejoiced to hear it, and learned much that will gladden the heart of brother Mycroft. Weaselby loved my brother dearly for his kindness when he first came to Hogwarts as a penniless and friendless (if pureblooded) child. However, Weaselby is not gifted with any great powers of observation or memory, and he can shed little light on the case itself. I have more hope, strangely, of O'Connell's papers. One can never fully trust the motives of a man of that sort, but there are little, indirect clues contained in those papers that may yet carry me a long way towards my goal. And if that is not far enough, well, I must resort to other means!” A fierce light came into his eyes, such as I had not seen since his final encounter with the late Professor Moriarty. “For men like Black are a pollution that both blight the world of wizards and, worse, spread their pestilence into ours – and I intend to put a stop to it, no matter how heavy the cost or how long it takes! If I could but free the world of Black’s malign influence, I truly believe that I would go to my grave a happy man.

“But enough of that. My poor Watson, you are looking quite done up. The air in these magical institutions can have a noxious affect on the unprepared, and in any case it would be the height of folly to return directly to London. O'Connell's fair words and promises are all very well, but they do not go quite far enough for me. I believe we would do well to alight at Newcastle or thereabouts, and make for the coast. The climate and scenery are, I believe, excellent at this time of year, and you will have ample time to take the sea air and compile your notes, while I subject O'Connell's papers to a really thorough examination. Oh, and I would recommend that you make at least one extra copy of your record, and secrete it in a safe place before our departure: one can never be too careful when dealing with these people.”

“But Holmes,” I exclaimed, “surely you do not mean to suggest that Black and his cohorts will fall on us unawares and take our memories from us, in spite of all you have done?” 

Holmes considered this for a movement.

“It is possible, I suppose, but unlikely,” he said. “Once Black's behaviour becomes common knowledge among wizards (as it inevitably will), he will hardly be able to move against us directly – and even if he did, my behaviour when I left London was so eccentric that I expect to be pestered with questions on the subject for months: I feel quite certain that one or the other of the clues I left in the course of our journey to the station would be bound to jog my memory sooner or later – those that were not secret messages to Mycroft. It does not pay to leave such matters to chance, that is all. 

“But perhaps I am giving the man too much credit,” he continued as our train slowed slightly in preparation to cross the Forth Bridge. “For what, after all, are the works of wizards, compared to what we have achieved here? Look, Watson!” he cried, gesturing towards the struts and spars of the towering, iron-red structure as they flashed past the windows of our carriage, “there's a miracle, if you like; there's a worthy subject for the history books; there's a fitting use of human talent and ingenuity! Why fear Black and his like when the future belongs to us? No wizard could build such a bridge, or the Crystal Palace, or Eiffel's tower in Paris; no wizard could invent the telegraph, or the smallpox vaccination, or the steam engine: why, the very train we took to Hogwarts is copied from a Muggle design! So long as we have science at our command, our future will contain miracles that will make the very best that Black can offer seem like the tawdriest of music-hall performers.

“But for now, let us turn to more pleasant matters. On our departure, O'Connell was kind enough to furnish us with a most splendid picnic, including a selection of bottles that appear to have been purloined from friend Black's special cellar. It is perhaps a little early in the day, but you and I need not stand on ceremony. Can I tempt you to a dram of whisky? Or perhaps a little of this rather unusual cognac?” 

THE END

[identity profile] cesario.livejournal.com 2008-01-02 11:21 pm (UTC)(link)
OH NOES IS THE RATHER UNUSUAL COGNAC GOING TO WIPE THEIR MEMORIES?

That was an extraordinarily fitting end to a high entertaining story. Holmes' monologue at the end there in particular made me very happy. It is a) the kind of sentiment I always wanted someone to express in a HP fanfiction (if only to counter all the weird pureblood fetishizing that sometimes happens) and b) so very perfectly Holmes that I feel compelled to observe that, if Doyle had ever been inclined to write a story that pit Holmes against a supernatural world, he would have given Holmes a very similar sort of speech.

And now that it's done, I'm off to rec it in my journal!

[identity profile] dolorous-ett.livejournal.com 2008-01-03 02:20 pm (UTC)(link)
AMNESIAC CONGAC? I NEVER EVEN THOUGHT OF THAT!!!1! (but there's a great story lurking in there somewhere...)

I'm so glad you liked this part - I've really enjoyed reading your comments on this story!

And thank you for enjoying Holmes's little monologue on the wonders of Muggle technology. It's actually inspired by the end of one of the later short stories (annoyingly, I can't remember which one), in which he points out board-schools from the train window, as beacons leading to a brighter future...

And a rec? I'm honoured! Thank you!

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[identity profile] pasi.livejournal.com 2008-01-03 01:03 am (UTC)(link)
Very satisfying!

Maybe a sequel, after Holmes has gone through O'Connell's papers?

[identity profile] dolorous-ett.livejournal.com 2008-01-03 02:22 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you - I'm glad you liked it!

Maybe a sequel, after Holmes has gone through O'Connell's papers?

I have vague ideas for one or more sequels - though not all of these feature Holmes going after Black straight away...

[identity profile] mattador.livejournal.com 2008-01-03 02:34 am (UTC)(link)
Brilliantly done.

[identity profile] dolorous-ett.livejournal.com 2008-01-03 02:22 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you for dropping by - I'm glad you enjoyed it.

[identity profile] aerama.livejournal.com 2008-01-03 04:31 am (UTC)(link)
"You might argue, indeed, that it will have come home at last, to be cared for by the true heirs of Rowena Ravenclaw – she who loved wit and learning above all things.” - fabulous.

"The air in these magical institutions can have a noxious affect on the unprepared." - HA! I can just hear him saying it too.

I love Holmes's closing words, especially about the Hogwarts train being 'copied;' - I've always loved that it was a steam train in the first place, and the homage to Muggle invention with all that you mentioned was brilliant, touching, and exactly what Holmes would think. Not for him to remain wrapped up in the gloomy clouds of what went on in his latest adventure; he prefers the real things in life.

Bravo!

And yes, there had better be a sequel.

[identity profile] dolorous-ett.livejournal.com 2008-01-03 02:28 pm (UTC)(link)
Oooo! Icon love! (what's the cartoon? It seems ever so familiar!)

I'm glad you liked the Ravenclaw's heir conceit - nobody ever said it had to be an heir of the blood, did they? Black just assumed it!

Thank you for picking out the closing words on the miracles of the modern age - over Christmas I saw a lot of stuff on the Victorian age on the TV, and it really hit home how proud and optimistic people were then about their acheivements and their future.

There may well be sequels - I've got several ideas that I think would make nice short stories - though sadly the Adventure of the Absent Stag-Beetle is still not fit for the world at large, not even after all these years! Still, other prospects beckon: The Adventure of the Three Lovegoods, anyone?

Thank you as well for all your lovely reviews while I was writing this!

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[identity profile] aerama.livejournal.com 2008-01-03 04:38 am (UTC)(link)
And I've just recced this as well, so now.

[identity profile] dolorous-ett.livejournal.com 2008-01-03 02:29 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you - that's an honour indeed!

[identity profile] nineveh-uk.livejournal.com 2008-01-03 10:30 am (UTC)(link)
I intend to put a stop to it, no matter how heavy the cost or how long it takes! If I could but free the world of Black’s malign influence, I truly believe that I would go to my grave a happy man.

Aha! Then Holmes didn't really retire to take up bee-keeping, and all that Mary Russell guff is just a cover story?

The whole thing was simply marvellous. I look forward to the sequel...

[identity profile] dolorous-ett.livejournal.com 2008-01-03 02:34 pm (UTC)(link)
I believe Holmes really did take up beekeeping in canon, among other things. Which is not to say that Mary Russell's stories are any more than just stories... (I should say that I've never actually read any, so am not knocking the Beekeeper's Apprentice tales at all, though the idea doesn't sound altogether Holmesian, to my way of thinking.)

I have several ideas for sequels. It's a question of getting a coherent story out of an idea - and finding the time to write it down...
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[identity profile] st-aurafina.livejournal.com 2008-01-03 10:59 am (UTC)(link)
EeeeEEEEeeeeeEEEee! Well done! *waves celebratory flags and streamers*

I have such an image of the Codex in the Reading Room - and I wonder what other peculiar texts have been squirreled away there. I love, love, love Holmes' pride in the works of man - the bridges and the Eiffel Tower and so on, it makes much sense for a man of his era, when everyone was wondrously impressed with how clever they all were.

It's been so much fun to read along with this! Congratulations on getting it done!

[identity profile] dolorous-ett.livejournal.com 2008-01-03 02:43 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you - it's quite a relief to get it done at last!

I'm glad you approve of the Codex's fate (interestingly, everyone seems to assume that Black will do something and that's where it'll end up!). And "when everyone was wondrously impressed with how clever they all were" pretty much sums up the Victorians, doesn't it?

I'm glad you enjoyed following this - despite the long breaks between updates...

[identity profile] jonas72.livejournal.com 2008-01-03 11:33 am (UTC)(link)
If you ever do a sequel, be sure to set up a meeting between Holmes and Dumbledore. Albus or Aberforth, depending on wether you are in the mood for crack-fic or not.

[identity profile] dolorous-ett.livejournal.com 2008-01-03 02:43 pm (UTC)(link)
Ooooh, now there's an idea... *ponders*

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[personal profile] snorkackcatcher 2008-01-03 01:33 pm (UTC)(link)
Very interesting little closing speech from Holmes, as were the precautions he seems to have taken -- and I believe we are well placed for a sequel, yes?

In short: this is the kind of story that makes me regret that I've already Niffled one of your fics, as this would have been an ideal Niffle!

[identity profile] dolorous-ett.livejournal.com 2008-01-03 02:46 pm (UTC)(link)
*blushes*

It's an honour to get approved by a Niffler even once - I'm proud to lap up the praise even if it doesn't translate into a Niffle (and why should it? Plenty of excellent stories never get Niffled!)

I believe it may have been you who drew my attention to the precautions, and reminded me that I shouldn't leave that bit of the story hanging - so I'm glad you noted them!

And yes - I do have certain plans for one or more sequels - not necessarily all of them taking on Black - but it's early days yet.

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[identity profile] dreamer-marie.livejournal.com 2008-01-04 03:45 am (UTC)(link)
Congratulations on finishing your fic! It was a great read. Now that you're done, I should re-read it.
Also, I loved the epilogue. Holmes's speech is great!

[identity profile] dolorous-ett.livejournal.com 2008-01-04 12:25 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you for this and all your other kind reviews - I'm so glad you liked it!

[identity profile] dancesontrains.livejournal.com 2008-01-04 02:20 pm (UTC)(link)
This was a lovely crossover :) I'm glad that you are planning sequels.

[identity profile] dolorous-ett.livejournal.com 2008-01-04 04:27 pm (UTC)(link)
Glad you liked it. And thank you for dropping by to let me know!

And yes, I do have some ideas for sequels... eventually!

[identity profile] velvet-tipping.livejournal.com 2008-01-06 06:15 pm (UTC)(link)
hey there!

it seems we've got some people in common, and i really, really enjoy your writing. so--may i add you?

[identity profile] dolorous-ett.livejournal.com 2008-01-06 06:34 pm (UTC)(link)
Charmed to make your acquaintance!

*friends back*

[identity profile] lyras.livejournal.com 2008-01-07 08:14 am (UTC)(link)
Just finished off the last few chapters in one gulp - excellent stuff. Now that I've actually read (well, listened to) some Sherlock Holmes stories, I'm amazed at how well you've caught the tone, particularly of Holmes's dialogue.

If you wanted to write a sequel, or another story in this universe, I'd happily read it...

[identity profile] velvet-tipping.livejournal.com 2008-01-07 12:36 pm (UTC)(link)
[me too]
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[personal profile] white_hart 2008-01-13 10:37 am (UTC)(link)
Finally got round to reading this. I really enjoyed it - you do have Watson's voice down perfectly!

[identity profile] dolorous-ett.livejournal.com 2008-01-14 08:40 pm (UTC)(link)
I'm glad you enjoyed it - it was great fun to write! There's something about Conan Doyle's style that almost writes itself...

[identity profile] lareinenoire.livejournal.com 2008-01-25 08:14 pm (UTC)(link)
...and the ending was just lovely, like the rest!

Loved Holmes' speech, and how proud he is of his fellow men. You really captured not just him, but that entire generation there. They really believed they could do anything.

And I especially love the idea of the Codex turning up in the British Library. Utter brilliance.

Lastly, sequels? Yes!

[identity profile] dolorous-ett.livejournal.com 2008-01-25 08:52 pm (UTC)(link)
I'm glad you liked it - especially as you're by way of being an expert in the field...

They really believed they could do anything.

That's what makes the Victorians so maddening and loveable to me - they did all sorts of things we wouldn't dream of doing now, but really believe they were making the world a better place. All we can do is look over our shoulders and complain.

I thought you might appreciate the Codex ending up in the British Library - have you seen the wonderful books on display there? Amazing.

Sequels? I have a couple of vague plans on the drawing board...

[identity profile] afterthree.livejournal.com 2008-01-31 10:08 pm (UTC)(link)
As a fan of both Holmes and Potter, I can't begin to tell you how very much I enjoyed this. It was a wonderfully insightful commentary on wizards of that era, and it was truly delightful to read in the well-replicated style of Doyle himself. Bravo!

[identity profile] dolorous-ett.livejournal.com 2008-02-01 02:49 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you very much - I'm glad you enjoyed it, because it was fun to write!
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[personal profile] minkhollow 2008-02-03 06:54 am (UTC)(link)
...Okay, so I just read the whole thing in the last... hour and a half? Something like that. And that was AWESOME.
Victorian Hogwarts! Phineas being... well, a Black! Also, BEST DESCRIPTION OF SLYTHERINS EVER.
In conclusion, win. ::hands you an Internet::

[identity profile] dolorous-ett.livejournal.com 2008-02-03 01:48 pm (UTC)(link)
*blushes*

Thank you very much for reading and enjoying my odd story!

(and for notciing and appreciating O'Connell - he's one of those characters who sort of comes to life as you're writing him, even though he's only a minor figure in this story...)

[identity profile] katyhasclogs.livejournal.com 2008-02-03 12:32 pm (UTC)(link)
Ahhh, Sherlock Holmes and Harry Potter all rolled into one. What more could a girl want?

I enjoyed this so much. It felt just like any original SH story - you have the style to a T.

[identity profile] katyhasclogs.livejournal.com 2008-02-03 01:35 pm (UTC)(link)
You seem like a very interesting person, may I friend you? Also, is there anywhere I can find other fics that you've written? I can't see a link to an archive of master list anywhere.
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[identity profile] allie-meril.livejournal.com 2008-03-04 03:16 am (UTC)(link)
Oh, fun! What a delightful crossover! Great fic. :)

[identity profile] dolorous-ett.livejournal.com 2008-03-04 01:04 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you - I'm glad you enjoyed it!

[identity profile] amanuensis1.livejournal.com 2008-06-23 04:14 pm (UTC)(link)
I've had this bookmarked for ages, and finally got to sit down and read it straight through today! What a delightful piece! The voice is perfectly Holmesian, and it's such an entertaining tale, with its twists and turns that are never too great a leap of logic. I adored it and I'm so glad I got to read it at last.

[identity profile] miss-morland.livejournal.com 2008-09-20 10:51 pm (UTC)(link)
This was absolutely brilliant! In fact, I had to remind myself several times that I wasn't reading an ACD story... Wonderful characterisations, great plot, interesting OCs (I particularly liked O'Connell) and a satisfying epilogue (so glad to see that Holmes's seemingly inexplicable behaviour from earlier was there for a reason!).

In short, fantastic. Thanks for writing it.&hearts

[identity profile] sporkmetender.livejournal.com 2008-11-02 07:42 am (UTC)(link)
Brilliant! I love the way everything came together...just like a typical Holmes case. I particularly admired the headmaster's purple shoes/scuff marks. And I love that the whole story is an excellent explanation of why Black was Hogwarts's least popular headmaster.

I also feel compelled to note that you channel Doyle exceedingly well. Your Watson, in particular, is adorable in his typical, big-hearted, fumbling way. Definitely a Hufflepuff.
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[personal profile] azurelunatic 2009-02-12 07:07 am (UTC)(link)
Coming to this very late, but ever so well-done!

[identity profile] flyingcarpet.livejournal.com 2009-03-17 02:54 pm (UTC)(link)
This was wonderful -- very entertaining, and a perfect blend of the two universes. Great job!
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[identity profile] isiscolo.livejournal.com 2009-05-26 04:42 pm (UTC)(link)
This was awesome beyond the telling of it! The merging of the worlds was very well done; I particularly liked Holmes's backstory, his distrust of the wizarding world and the way he turned Black's machinations against him. I think perhaps it's because in HP canon we see the world of magic through the eyes of a child who first discovers its wonders, and of course, it's magic, yay! to most of us, so the jaundiced eye is a fresh perspective. Watson is a fabulous narrator and seems very true to the original stories. In conclusion: AWESOME.

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